Will she kiss me? Or bite me?

He wasn’t sure she liked him,
because she refused to meet his eyes.

He had to meet her.
He couldn’t help himself.
She was delicate, shy, and pretty.
He didn’t care if she didn’t have a dowry.
He didn’t need her money. He needed her affection.

Would she accept his advances?
Or would she tell him to take a hike?

He tried to be gentle.
He didn’t want to frighten her.
He wasn’t a wild Hyena, after all.
He was domesticated. He had manners.

After a while, his control paid off.
She let him get close…close enough for a kiss.

And that is how this romance writer writes a love scene…


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ella September 9, 2011 at 7:23 am

Oh they are so sweet, it’s funny how much we can learn about relationships from animals…I’m serious
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Kim @ Homesteader's Heart September 9, 2011 at 7:42 am

Just slap that in a book and they would think you were talking about real people. LOL! I love Min-Pins. My parents had a couple of them when I was growing up. So cute.
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Caution September 9, 2011 at 9:52 am

I think she is being very, very wise!
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Jo H. September 10, 2011 at 12:11 am

So sweet. We could do much worse than be inspired by our animal friends.

joe September 11, 2011 at 1:59 am

We are separate breeds. From different sides of the fence. Our owners don’t approve, physically pulling us apart. They don’t understand m- SQUIRREL!
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Jo September 13, 2011 at 2:34 pm

Hilarious! I was scrawling down to see how the story ended, but there was no closure 😉 So, was there a happy ending?
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